*short story originally written for The Iron Writer Challenge, in which no more than 525 words could be used to tell a story with a few required elements – bullying, a dog listening to a banjo, stress, something endangered. It was kind of tough to include all of those!
Thank you for reading, I’d love to know what you think in the comments!
Janine stared at the computer in disbelief. This can’t be happening, where is all of our money going? Of course she could see where the money was going – doctor visits, school supplies, vet bills… The list of expenses was never ending. But the list of income, on the other hand, was short. And the credit cards were at their limit.
“Mom!” “Hey don’t hit!” “Mom!” Her two boys were yelling for her simultaneously and then, as though on cue, the dog started barking on his way through the dog door. In an effort to suppress the noise she marched into the living room where her sons were.
I swear to the lord above if those boys wake April I’m going to beat ‘em within an inch of their lives! Endangered brothers, that’s what they are. “Hush now! The baby is sleeping! What is going on out here?!”
A slurry of explanations spewed forth from her rowdy four- and six-year-old sons. She held up a hand to stop them “One at a time please! Marcus, why is your brother crying?”
“I don’t know but he hit me with the controller!” Marcus exclaimed, pointing a chubby finger at his little brother Keenan.
“Because he called me stupid! Stupid is the not nice word Mom!” Keenen choked out between subsiding sobs.
“Marcus, stop bullying your brother! He’s only a little guy. Keenan, buck up. You can’t just hit someone because they call you a mean word. Ok?” They nodded slowly, considering their options. “Now If you two can’t get along and keep quiet I’ll gonna bust your butts!”
A jumble of “No!” and “But mom!” were met with her patented look of serious discipline.
She heard the dog continue to bark outside. “Alright then. Well you need to be quiet and so does your dog. Go out to the backyard and play with him please. Keep him from barking for thirty minutes and then, if your civil, you can go back to the Xbox.”
As the boys trudged off to the backyard, Janine settled back behind the computer to continue deciding which bills could be paid and which could be put off.
Janine woke later to the sound of music coming from the backyard. She glanced at her watch and wondered how she managed to fall asleep in a house as loud and stressful as hers. She checked the video baby monitor to find April was already out of her crib. She stumbled to the back door, relaxing only when she saw her husband holding April in one arm and the video camera in the other.
“Hey sweetie, didn’t want to wake you. But you’re just in time for the encore show.” He smiled and nodded to the grass where Marcus and Keenan were standing side by side facing their dog Scruff, matching banjos in hand.
“Banjos?” She asked.
“Garage sale down the road.”
She sat down next to her husband, pleasantly stunned at her lifting mood – a beautiful summer evening, a happy baby and husband, and her two sweet, no-longer-arguing boys playing some banjos for their dog. Maybe their lives weren’t endangered after all.
I do remember those days when my three sons were little and constantly attacking each other and bearing each other up.
Thank you so much for reading Peta! I don’t actually have kids, so it’s good to know that I managed to make it seem relatable.
Oh well done then. Right on!
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Oh my gosh Erin! It’s so exciting to hear from you! And you just randomly found my blog!? That’s awesome!! 😀 thank you for reading my short story – if I ever do write a whole book (non-scary) I’ll definitely let you know! And proofreaders are always nice to have. Lol